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Amy and Gabi Chapter 1

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Post by RachelGoesRAWRツ Tue May 17, 2011 12:52 am

This is the story about two young sisters who got separated at birth. Amy and Gabi's parents died in a fire and their other relatives died before both the girls were born. So they had foster parents and never saw each other again. We don't know where Amy lives but Gabi lives in central Nevada. She is now 12 years old and this is how the story starts. "Up! Up! Get up Gabriella Syinson right now! Breakfast doesn't last that long! Now up!" Gabi's foster mom said angrily. "Do you have to yell? I need my beauty sleep you know." "Breakfast isn't a beautiful sight right now so get your robe on and come downstairs." My foster parent is so rude. I've changed foster parents 5 times. I only remember the worst 2. The first one was a guy who was in this gangster club. He just made bad decisions so I ran away. The second was a woman who had two children. She said the kids wanted someone to play with so she started a foster home there. Surprisingly I was the only foster kid there. Her kids were so annoying so I ran away from there. This lady I have now is the worst of the worst. Ugh hopefully I'll be gone and out of this foster house soon!


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Post by maybear2☆9 Tue May 17, 2011 1:04 am

That was PAWSOME start Rachel! Cants wait for more. Now so far, you are like my fifth fav story writer/ author! Can't wait to here what happens next!
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Post by gabi Tue May 17, 2011 1:09 am

I'm Loving This Story Already, Not Just The Fact My Name Is There x3 But Because The Situation You're Describing Is Happening To Many Children Today. Also Very Suspenseful! I Wanted To Keep Reading But I Have To Wait! xD I Cannot Wait For The Next Chapter! =]
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