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Into the darkness™:Chapter 1
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Into the darkness™:Chapter 1
New school, new home, new town. What could get worse? I hate this new town i'm living in. There's woods everywhere!."Chrystal....." The voice repeated over and over. "Chrystal!!!" " Huh what". I woke up. " School's over.." I got up and got my backpack. "So? You like the new town? New smell, new friends. You might even get to check out the haunted woods!" I looked at her strange, and then changed the subject. " What's your Name". " My name is Jenny", She said.A car drove up. It was my parents. "Later", I told Jenny.
" We got you an awesome surprise for your first day of school", Mom said. She drove up to the pet store." What are we doing here?", I asked. " Think of a name you would name a dog", she said. We walked in. At the corner of my eye, there was a little, Husky puppy. I ran to the cage it was in and smiled. " That's a good dog" The lady said. There was silence.
After about 40 minutes, i got my dog. We got home and all i did was play with her.I named her, Hachi.4 days when by, they were great. I was starting to love this town but not quite. It was day 5, the fith day of school of course.After school, i had an horrible ache in my stomach. Something was wrong.Sure enough, i got home and i heard the news. " Chrystal, your dog Hachi is missing, were gonna into the woods in our backyard for her", Dad said.We did.
We were in the forest. Everywhere you looked was tree's and sunlight."We need to split up",Dad said. He wen't one way and i went the other.
There was a wierd sound. " Dad? I don't wanna split up...", I said. There was no answer. So i started my way through the forest.All of a sudden, there was a girl that looked horrible. She was standing by a hole and she jumped in.
I jumped in with her. But when i hit the ground, there were spirits looking at me."We know all that has happened", a spirit said." We will help you find your dog, only, that is, if you find 5 items for us". " Yay!! I love scavenger hunts!", i said. The spirit looked serious at me and said " It is not as easy as you think", it said.
That's the end of chapter 1!!!
" We got you an awesome surprise for your first day of school", Mom said. She drove up to the pet store." What are we doing here?", I asked. " Think of a name you would name a dog", she said. We walked in. At the corner of my eye, there was a little, Husky puppy. I ran to the cage it was in and smiled. " That's a good dog" The lady said. There was silence.
After about 40 minutes, i got my dog. We got home and all i did was play with her.I named her, Hachi.4 days when by, they were great. I was starting to love this town but not quite. It was day 5, the fith day of school of course.After school, i had an horrible ache in my stomach. Something was wrong.Sure enough, i got home and i heard the news. " Chrystal, your dog Hachi is missing, were gonna into the woods in our backyard for her", Dad said.We did.
We were in the forest. Everywhere you looked was tree's and sunlight."We need to split up",Dad said. He wen't one way and i went the other.
There was a wierd sound. " Dad? I don't wanna split up...", I said. There was no answer. So i started my way through the forest.All of a sudden, there was a girl that looked horrible. She was standing by a hole and she jumped in.
I jumped in with her. But when i hit the ground, there were spirits looking at me."We know all that has happened", a spirit said." We will help you find your dog, only, that is, if you find 5 items for us". " Yay!! I love scavenger hunts!", i said. The spirit looked serious at me and said " It is not as easy as you think", it said.
That's the end of chapter 1!!!
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xTayIsh-Cool<3- Newsteam
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Amazing story Taylor
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Updated :)
xTayIsh-Cool<3- Newsteam
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That's a good story Taylor, it's also a little creepy in a way for me. Lol. I liked it so I can't wait when it is like updated. Good start btw.
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That's the end of chapter 1 u guys :)
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Oh em geezle!! This is an amazing story/chapter! =) Cant wait to read more.
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That is a great story,I can't wait untill you update!
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