The Last Tale of Friendship. // Jenni </3

by MeBeJennifer;3 Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:20 pm

The Last Tale of Friendship
Poem By ;; Jenni

So they decide to tell me this now,
When schools all over at the end of the day.
I cannot describe the pain I'm in,
Everything I'm going through is impossible to say.

So again I express through words,
How I am feeling inside.
As the feelings have been built up inside of me,
All these years have been truely a ride.

I've worked for 6 years,
To keep and mantain the wonderous years.
But no, you take it for granted,
And move on with the rest of our peers.

So today, June 16th, 2011, I delcare your voice of saying,
"We can still be friends, but not as close.",
As I ran away onto my bus,
Burstng into tears.

I was heart-broken,
Not knowing what to say.
My best friends have just left me...
I'm in this stage, and I'm going to stay.

They tell me this on the very last day,
Before Summer Vacation starts.
How am I supposed to have a blast,
When I know my two best friends want to part?

So it's now Officially Summer Vacation,
And I'm just sitting here crying.
While my other friends are probably having fun,
And I'm just sitting here sighing.

Goodbye my good old friends,
I'm still gonna try my best.
I say this time and time again,
"The future and time hold the rest."

by **lizard** Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:22 pm

It's beautiful Jenny,
I know what you're feeling.
I'm so sorry,
It's their loss.
They will come back for chuu hun ;33.

by FawnIshGreen Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:23 pm

Wow, that's really good!

by Caya Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:23 pm

Aww!!! Jenni!!! It's Beautiful!!

by Adalia Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:25 pm

Another great poem, Jenni. [:
It is sad though, that yew feel this way. Yew'll make new ones though. :3
Yew really fit your emotions very well into your poems, feel better soon! ;DD

by ZoeyLaMars Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:25 pm

Oh.My.GOSH Jenni this was fantastic
i actually FELT it..Im SOO Sorry about what happened to you

Your Friend Always-Zoey (:

by maybear2☆9 Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:27 pm

That is a wonderful poem but it's also sad that your best pals like left ya in a way.... Sorry about that but over all, I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!! ~hope ya feel better or have more joy and alll~
The Last Tale of Friendship. // Jenni </3 2466222028

The Last Tale of Friendship. // Jenni </3 2466222028

loved the poem.....
:| sorry about your pals...

by Badge Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:30 pm

Jenni, It's their loss! You are an amazing person and will make loads of friends, Better ones and you have us, The poem was great

by Jeanna Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:35 pm

ohmygosh. if this is about u..i nearly cried. omg
<3 amazing, touching poem.<3
nobody's perfect, i gotta work it. =') i like this alot, the troubles of other people...haha i go through alot during the day so its nice to know ppl feel the same way.
beautiful, perfect job..<3

by MeBeJennifer;3 Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:38 pm

Jeanna wrote:ohmygosh. if this is about u..i nearly cried. omg
<3 amazing, touching poem.<3
nobody's perfect, i gotta work it. =') i like this alot, the troubles of other people...haha i go through alot during the day so its nice to know ppl feel the same way.
beautiful, perfect job..<3

Yesh this was about me -- Hense "June 16th, 2011" <-- Happened today.
I was crying like crazy and all that.. My friends on the bus comforted me, thoughh..
Even some random kid asked me what was wrong.. Razz

Ahaha, I'm alright-ish now, though :3
Thankiesh!

by PowerOfTheSage:D Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:43 pm

Very touching poem Jennii. So sad though sad

I'm dealing with something similar

"Even some random kid asked me what was wrong.. Razz

" Haha xD

by Libby♥ Fri Jun 17, 2011 2:52 pm

That was a very touching poem.I'm so sorry about your friends.

by Princess Spring Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:21 am

Ohh, Jenni its ok. It happend to me once when my bestest friend ( bestie ) move to a new home far away. How said I was!!! But I called her often and you might should do that too. Tell her whats going on at school and something new she didn't know about.

by Kirby Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:28 am

As others said, this was very touching.

This is an amazing piece of writing, Jenny :'(

I'm also sorry about your friends.

by ClareTS3Obsessed♦ Tue Jun 21, 2011 1:34 am

it is very touching you know i ALWAYS love your writing jenni keep it up :D

by JaneIshMe♥ Tue Jun 21, 2011 2:02 am

That's a wonderful poem. I really wanna see other poetry by you!

Today was my last day of school and that is just the same way of how I felt at 12:45PM today. sad