Thoughts; Chapter 1
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Thoughts; Chapter 1
by MeBeJennifer;3 Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:15 pm
Thoughts; Chapter 1.
Story Written By Jenni.
Story Written By Jenni.
I'm sitting there wondering... Who am I really? Am I what everyone claims I am? Are they lying?
I'll never know. Or will I? I question my every move. Is that good? Bad? People never talk to me. Why?
Can someone please answer my questions?
As I walked past my bathroom, I did something different for a change. I stopped and took a good long stare at myseld. I thought of everything that was different about me to other people that I saw.
I could have thought of a million differences. Did I choose to? No. knew I'd just cause myself despair.
So instead, I decided to just sit there and well, think for a while.
Why do people treat me so differently? Why can't I be an outgoing person? Why must I be shy around people? I always wanted new friends and now my old friends are leaving me without even one bit of sorry or regret. What will I do? - I thought.
I kept roaming around my house.I was bored. Tomorrow is Monday so I go back to school. I feel like everyone hates me, or they just think I'm a nobody and a loser. What can I possibly do?
The doorbell rang. I went to my room and looked out the window. It was my neighbor. Should I open the door? My mom and dad aren't home.. I decided I should so I went downstairs, unlocked the door, and cautiously opened the door. All he wanted was to give me a flyer for next Saturday's block party. When he left, he had a disgusted look on his face. I knew he was trying hard not to show it. I felt tears rolling down my face as I dropped the flyer on the stairs and ran to my room.
"Why must everyone hate me!?!" I shouted out bursting into tears.
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Re: Thoughts; Chapter 1
by Adalia Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:35 pm
That Was Really Great! Really Good Writing! I Can't Wait To Read More! (:
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Re: Thoughts; Chapter 1
by maybear2☆9 Sat Apr 23, 2011 7:54 pm
that story is AWESOME! Those are like the same thoughts about me and what i think of and all. lol. oh well. well, this is A GREAT story but you had some error and missspelled word in it but it doesnt matter much cause it's noraml. just saying. lol. LOVED IT!
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Re: Thoughts; Chapter 1
by Jeanna Sun Apr 24, 2011 9:58 pm
This is totally PERFECT! xx
Amazing title, storyline, and beginning.<3
Reminds me of my real life..
Keep writing, I feel so bad for the girl :'( ahaha
Love the chapter--cant wait for more!
I have always loved your stories! :)
Amazing title, storyline, and beginning.<3
Reminds me of my real life..
Keep writing, I feel so bad for the girl :'( ahaha
Love the chapter--cant wait for more!
I have always loved your stories! :)
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