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My Poem
by CrazyJackie Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:48 am
I look behind me
and see my life before my eyes
It's disappearing
like the dirt on black paved roads.
I'm moving away
from the grassy green blades,
sharp as a stick,
to a place were cows roam,
and a bucket of foam will clean things.
This is actually the first poem I ever wrote, and I hope you like it. xD
and see my life before my eyes
It's disappearing
like the dirt on black paved roads.
I'm moving away
from the grassy green blades,
sharp as a stick,
to a place were cows roam,
and a bucket of foam will clean things.
This is actually the first poem I ever wrote, and I hope you like it. xD
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yeah
by maybear2☆9 Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:56 am
it's pretty good jackie. well written. keep up the great work!
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Re: My Poem
by Jeanna Wed Apr 13, 2011 10:21 pm
Ooo, a little eerie and sadish but very well done. (: Really like it! <33
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