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-TheFeedBackOfAnn :; 2nd Edition

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Post by Adalia on Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:04 pm

Okay, So Welcome to my feedback dolls! If you have made it here, you are truly awesome. Here, I will post poems about my closest friends, and not so close friends. Be honored if you are in this feedback my loves, for you have earned my trust. If your not on here, I am most likely thinking of something creative to put in your poem, I can't have everyone's poem be bland are boring now? That would just be horribly mean to put the same thing over, and over again.

A Tribute To My Twin.
-TheKeyToMyHeart
{In A Sisterly Way}
You are the light in my darkness, you help me through.
Without you, where would I be?
Lost in the dark, in a cold helpless room.
You’re the sister I never had,
Without you, I’d be gone.
You’re the closest thing to me,
You’ll always be in my heart, no matter what.
The big sister, I’d always hoped for.
You see the best, and worst of me, yet still you accept me,
For whom I am, and nothing less, nor more.
You’re the one person, I can count on.
The one person, I can pour all my problems to.
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^^ To Cassie. Love you like a big sistah' mah dear. [:


-LovelyAsianPanda
You are my sweet little Asian Panda.
The kind, that’s crazy and funny.
You brighten up a room every time you step in.
Anger problems? Maybe.
But, does it really matter, when you’re so sweet?
The problem solver, that one amazing thinker.
The one who comes up with brilliant ideas.
We share many things in common.
Who may that Asian Panda be?
Find out for yourselves.
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^^ For Jenni. My sister, I love you panda! [:


-ColorfulRainbowGurli
You’re the one that splatters paint across the walls.
Just like Willow Smith.
You’re not afraid to show who you are,
Crazy, yet sweet, that’s what we have in common.
People sometimes get confused with us.
Maybe it’s because were so alike?
You’re the one, who always has their shoulder open for me to cry on.
Keep being you, ColorfulRainbowGurli.
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^^ For Blue. Stay Colorful && Beautiful forever, my dear.


-ThatOneSpecialDonkey
Ever need someone who specializes in Donkeys?
Call on this girl.
She’s amazingly sweet, and upbeat.
She never fails to make you smile, must I say?
She’s funny, and unique in her special way.
I may not know her all that well, as I know Jenni && Cassie,
But, she will forever be in my heart.
Always && Forever, will be a special part of me.
Go on, my sweet little donkey-loving girl.
Spoiler:
^^ For Kaitlyn. Ily. [:


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Post by maybear2☆9 on Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:10 pm

That's such a sweet idea, Ann.
Your like the girl who comes with great ideas no matter what. Razz
Aazing idea and feedback, :D your friends: clay,jenni,blue,Katie, must feel super honored with these great words in such a great/short poem. Razz
amazing poem kind feedback, Ann. (:


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Post by ♥BlueRainbow on Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:24 pm

Awwhh! ♥
Luhv the poems. :3 Yhur rlly sweet, adi! :3
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Post by KaitLuvsDonkeys;D on Tue Aug 02, 2011 4:35 pm

Aww thats the sweetest thing anyone has ever said to me D; You'll always be my frannn and in my heart as well ;D Lylas<3
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Post by Jeanna on Tue Aug 02, 2011 5:01 pm

aww..creative feedback..[:
i bet they appreciate it so much...a poem dedicated to them..[: i have a song dedicated to meh, and i appreicate it soooo much <33 i listen to it all the time.(:
i know they will read this all the time and know how wonderful you are to them.
keep being a dedicated writer adi.[:
and of course, fab feedback [;
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Post by ♥Alicee on Tue Aug 02, 2011 8:45 pm

me be prouda adi for letting her feelings out Razz
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Post by MeBeJennifer;3 on Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:59 pm

OHMAIGAWSH. This brought me to tears, literally in real life ;D ♥
Hehe, Yes, I mayyyyy have some anger issues of my own, but I can control myself <33
You be'ith mah sister tooo! <33
You're poems are amazing and a very unique way to thank your friends! <33
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Post by ZoeyLaMars on Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:38 am

DUDE LIKE!?
This ish FANTASTIC! :OO
it brought tears tah MUI eyes!
...Mmmm Where Ish Mui Poem.
*hums* This Was Beautiful :OO
:'DD
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Post by gabi on Wed Aug 03, 2011 4:27 am

These Are Beautiful Poems. :3

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Post by Kasey(: on Wed Aug 03, 2011 3:05 pm

Adi, your amazing at writing <3
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Post by ThisIsABBY!:O on Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:37 pm

Awh! How sweet!
I'm sure Clay, Blue, Jenni, and Kait love those! [:
Thanks for sharing those! (:
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Post by EmilyThaMaster:O on Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:43 pm

Awh this is SO sweet!
Very creative FB!
I know that all of them surly love this <3
You're an amazing writer Adi! (:
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Post by Mikayla on Mon Aug 08, 2011 9:16 pm

Awwh ;'DD i agree with yhur feedback adi [: there are so many great and amazing people on this site [: and your one of them. (:

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Ily all.
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[04:30:11] @ Liz : When I was little i put my friends lizard down my brothers pants
[04:30:24] @ Liz : don't try this at home
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[00:45:27] @ Gabi : mr cow how is u
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[01:27:06] @ clay : im so ugly compared to everyone
[01:27:20] @ clay : omg dont look at me
[01:27:29] @ clay : shield your eyes
[01:27:33] * Liz looks at clay
[01:27:39] @ Liz : ew
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[22:43:57] @ Gabi : every1 left my garden
[22:44:03] @ Gabi : is it bc u all like being naked
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[20:38:14] @ rbi : i just spanked myself to see if it would hurt
[20:38:16] @ rbi : it did
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[15:03:15] @ peasant #1 : GABI OMG
[15:03:16] @ prince gabi : ay
[15:03:18] @ peasant #1 : MY LOVE
[15:03:20] @ prince gabi : MIK OMG
[15:03:24] @ prince gabi : MY BOO
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[19:51:55] @ prince gabi : mY BOOTY NEED SOME SCRUBBIN OK
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[21:47:03] @ gabi : im ded
[21:47:10] @ gabi : GIRL U HOT
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Post by Caitlin on Fri Aug 12, 2011 10:27 am

:O
love you too, person I dont know!! Razz
JK xDD
I've never seen such interesting feedbackk.. ;DD Nice. :DD

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[15:36:07] @ Cassieandriea : WERE IN LONDON BUT CASS AND I ARE FLYING BACK TO GET 2 OXES AND COMING BACK TOMORROW AFTERNOON/MORNING
[15:36:28] @ Test : WOW YOU HAVE OXES?
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Post by HannahLoveable on Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:10 pm

Awesome! Its nice seeing someone write such lovely stuff about there best friends(:
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