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I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by RachelGoesRAWRツ Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:52 pm
I'm so sorry Clay {Poem by Bethyyy}
I read the story I couldn't believe it was true
I screamed in my head and asked, "What am I gonna do?"
I got teary eyed and posted a comment
I then dreamed of Clay and saw a comet.
I made a wish that she could get better,
the next day later,
"I'm back from the hospital! I'm all better!"
This poem is my wish throughout my entire life.
We <3 you Clay. Be strong and we hope you get better.
I read the story I couldn't believe it was true
I screamed in my head and asked, "What am I gonna do?"
I got teary eyed and posted a comment
I then dreamed of Clay and saw a comet.
I made a wish that she could get better,
the next day later,
"I'm back from the hospital! I'm all better!"
This poem is my wish throughout my entire life.
We <3 you Clay. Be strong and we hope you get better.
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by Millie♥ Sun Jun 26, 2011 6:54 pm
That is so nice.I like the way it rhymes because some poems,don't.I'm sure Clay will love it.
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by ClareTS3Obsessed♦ Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:10 pm
Nice poem i'm glad clay lked it :D
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by lizard Sun Jun 26, 2011 7:13 pm
Great Poem Beth!
It's touching
I bet Clay loved it !
It's touching
I bet Clay loved it !
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by ZoeyLaMars Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:09 am
Woah.
That Blew Me Away.
That Was awesome!
That Blew Me Away.
That Was awesome!
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by ♥BlueRainbow Mon Jun 27, 2011 1:16 am
This is amazing, Beth!!
Yhur an amazing writer. :3 Also, hope yhu feel better soon Clay!
Yhur an amazing writer. :3 Also, hope yhu feel better soon Clay!
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by Starla2hip56 Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:03 am
Great poem! I like how it rhymes.
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by lulu Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:06 am
Aww! That is soo sweet of you!
It is a very sweet poem!
It is a very sweet poem!
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by RachelGoesRAWRツ Sat Jul 02, 2011 2:45 am
Thanks for the compliments guys :) It means a lot. It's my first good poem on here :DD
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Re: I'm so sorry clay poem xP
by maybear2☆9 Sun Jul 03, 2011 10:00 pm
That is a lovely poem, Rachel pal. Nice, and yeah.. Feel better soon, clay :)
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