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1st Poem // By Lizzie

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Option8 1st Poem // By Lizzie

Post by lizard Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:36 pm

I was just pouring out random Feelings ;3. My first poem I have made on this forum Razz. It's pretty deep, xD.

Sticks and stones May break my bones
But words will never harm me
Such a touching phrase,
but clearly untrue in my eyes.

I used to see crystal clear
But my lenses have been broken
I now view the world in a completely different way
Few offer to lend me their glasses.

I stick to my own customs
I have never vowed to change my ways
But the day has come
For me to re-mold myself.

I am going through a lot of pain right now
Not acting like myself
But please forgive me,
I will not let a fractured ankle bring me down.

I will get back up to your surprise
And try, try again
But I have never come across a moment like this
I assure you, I will get through it.

Maybe not today, maybe not a week from now
But soon enough with help
From those who sacrificed for me,
And stepped into my shoes.
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Option8 Re: 1st Poem // By Lizzie

Post by Adalia Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:38 pm

Nice poem, Lizzie. (:
I understand how yew feel. (x
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Option8 Re: 1st Poem // By Lizzie

Post by maybear2☆9 Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:40 pm

That is a really good poem even though I didn't get everything ya meant but it's good, nice.
:D
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Post by Jeanna Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:33 pm

what sorta poem is it ? (:
and nice job(: very nice words..<3
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Option8 Re: 1st Poem // By Lizzie

Post by lizard Fri Jun 17, 2011 10:47 pm

Jeanna wrote:what sorta poem is it ? (:
and nice job(: very nice words..<3
Im not really sure xD.
I didn't make it rhyme, so I guess freestyle? Razz
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