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Thoughts ; Chapter 3

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Post by MeBeJennifer;3 Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:44 pm

Thoughts ; Chapter 3 -
Original Story By Jenni♥

I felt scared. Helpless. Everyone was staring at me. I nearly fell as the bus suddenly began moving again. I took my usual seat on the bus by myself and looked out the window.

I was thinking again. What were they thinking about? Are they thinking about me? Good thughts?
Bad? I sighed as the bus stood to a halt in front of my school.

"Hey... What's your name again..?" A girl asked rudely.
"Amber..." I said nervously.
"Cool name. Wanna sit at lunch together? Oh and I'm Lexi, by the way." She said
"Umm... Sure.." I said unconfidently.
I knew something was up though. Why would a popular girl like Lexi even talk to me?
Let alone even pay attention to me. I'm just a lame 7th Grader.

Later today, I saw Samantha. She was somewhat like me; No friends, and everyone thinks we're losers.
"Hi. I'm Amber.." I said.
"Hi... I'm Samantha." She replied.
"Umm, So... what's up?" I asked.
"Err. To be honest, why are you talking to me? I'm a loser." She said dissapointingly.
"Well I am too. But if we're friends we wouldn't be." I said smiling.
"Umm, wanna sit at lunch? Call me Sammy, by the way." She asked smiling.
"Sure! And okay!" I smiled.
By that point, I had totally forgotten about Lexi. And that isn't such a great thing.

Why? She made my life miserable from that point on.


Stay Tuned For Chapter 4 of 'Thoughts'..♥
Coming Soon!


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Post by Adalia Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:50 pm

That was really good! Keep writing, and don't ever stop. Your really good at it!
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Post by Epic Sat Apr 30, 2011 11:52 pm

One of the best chapters i ever read :)
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Post by Jeanna Sun May 01, 2011 9:23 pm

OMG! Do you know me in real life or something?! Lol, I have a loser friend [sorry friend!] and a "popular" girl ive known started talking to me. hah, and im in 7th grade xDD
LOL anyways I love the story really gets you into it =) I cant wait to read the next chapter!
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Post by Libby♥ Mon May 02, 2011 6:52 pm

That is so good! =]
I can't wait untill Chapter 4
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