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Thoughts ; Chapter 2

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Post by MeBeJennifer;3 Wed Apr 27, 2011 8:41 pm

Thoughts ; Chapter 2
Written By Jenni


I don't know how long I was crying, but it was for a long while. The door bell rang again.
It was my parents. I didn't want to open the door at all, but I knew I had to. I quickly ran to the bathroom to wash away my tears.
I then walked to the door and opened it. I spoke with a soft voice.
"Welcome home" I said. My mom asked if I was alright. I just nodded my head trying to hold back anymore tears.

I was getting ready for school when my mom called me over to her room. She gave me this shirt that I would have never been able to pull off.
She obviously made me try it on, though. She told me to look in the mirror; And when i did, I felt and looked amazing.
I smiled at myself and thanked my mom. I gave her a kiss goodbye and waved as I left.

I was obviously hoping that I'd be more noticed; In a good way, that is. Or you know, atleast people wouldn't be so rude to me.
I was thinking whether I should even go to school. Second Thoughts, not so great. Too late.
I saw the bus come to a slow, steady halt in fron tof me. The doors opened.

When I got on the bus, i felt all eyes staring at me.


Stay Tuned for Chapter 3! ♥
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Post by Libby♥ Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:13 pm

I love it,your great at writing!
I can't wait until Chapter 3 =]
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Post by Jeanna Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:45 am

OMGG!! Suspense gurrrlll!!
I need more!! xD haha its really good!!
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Post by Epic Thu Apr 28, 2011 2:34 pm

Awesome!!! Can't wait for the next chapters
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Post by maybear2☆9 Sat May 07, 2011 5:27 pm

That was really PAWSOME jenni! I loved it, can't believe I didn't read it at first it came out.. Lol. Your like my maybe third-forth fav author! Way to.. I also loved the color you used somehow.. Lol. Nice
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