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thinking about writing a manga, what'd ya think?

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Post by PinkDaFluffyBear Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:07 pm

Ok so I was THINKING about writing a manga, more like drawing cause IT IS a manga,,, lol! So here is my idea, tell meh what you think! (it's more like a trialler in words... XD)

Yumi's First Love...

I liked my best friend, Liam... He was English, soon I began to love him... I began to follow him, and go everywere with him, but he soon realised that I was doing something wierd. When I finally got my self to tell him my true feelings...I regreted it badly, I soon found out, he didnt like me the way I did.... I felt so sad, and so terribly dissapointed, so sad I went to the high mountins and found a bridge... A bridge I was willing to jump off... But when I felt Liams, hand on my arm, I knew he wanted to me stop. As I stared into his eyes, mine began to fill up with tears.... He kissed me lightly on the cheek and said "goodbye Yumi" and walked away, never to be seen again...

So yeah, I might make lots of changes, I will keep you updated :D


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Post by cassieandriea Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:11 pm

I like it....maybe in the end many years later the dude comes back Razz
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Post by PinkDaFluffyBear Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:12 pm

he will.. IN PART 2 :D
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Post by peach rays bri Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:13 pm

Its good. LOL I like Clay's idea ^^
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Post by ForeverRain Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:13 pm

It's okayy... I don't really like love stories so.. Razz
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Post by MeBeJennifer;3 Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:14 pm

I LOVE it!! Such a good way to begin! :DD
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Post by PinkDaFluffyBear Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:15 pm

Remi11 wrote:It's okayy... I don't really like love stories so.. Razz
yh but overall its good?
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Post by Alexa Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:42 pm

I really like it, great job! Hope to see the final draft!!
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Post by PinkDaFluffyBear Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:28 pm

Thx guys, I will soon post the 2 main characters, and tell you more about them!
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Post by ♥Glo Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:08 pm

hahaha! i'm writing a manga too :)
do it! it's soo fun!
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Post by PinkDaFluffyBear Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:44 pm

OMG glo really?! THATS AMAZING! :D
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