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Words from the Walls [Preview]

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Post by Adri-Smilez (: Sun May 13, 2012 6:26 pm

Please excuse to strange title, it came to me completely randomly...My first story...it is quite terrible. It's based on an experience I've had but not exactly how it happened, I added a bit of drama to make it less dull. Please give your opinions and I might continue it or just end it. (Sorry that it's short, I just wanted to give a preview.)

"STOP!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. "Just leave me alone!" I slammed the door and sobbed loudly into my pillow. "Why doesn't anybody care?" I asked to the walls. I heard them coming up to my room. I quickly raced to the door and pushed on it as hard as I could, I told my mum taking away the lock on my door wasn't a good idea. "Open the door!" They pushed harder. "Go away!" I screamed. "Stop yelling, the neighbors'll hear you." She shushed me. "Of course you would say that," I said louder. "all you care about it your public image, if anyone found out who you really were you would be ruined." My hands were trembling, I couldn't hold on much longer. If they push one more time the door will open. And they did just that. The door opened and I could see their angry faces.
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Post by StacyღNarnia Sun May 13, 2012 7:44 pm

OMG love this
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Post by teddybearhug229 Sun May 13, 2012 11:51 pm

I <3 this too!
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Post by Starla2hip56 Sat May 19, 2012 2:34 am

Interesting.. (:
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Post by ♥Alicee Sun May 27, 2012 3:45 pm

This is really good.
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