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Post by MeBeJennifer;3 on Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:24 am

Yeah. So I wrote this poem for my english project. It's based off of a book I had to read for it.
The project is a book report but my teacher likes to be creative.
- If you're wondering, this is how my project came out looking ::
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Sooo, the book is Torn by Margaret Peterson Haddix.
You probably won't understand the poem that much, but yeah xD
Enjoy :D P.S.- I'm writing 2 new stories..? o;


Damaged & Torn
We knew we weren't done,
Still traveling through hollows of time,
It was never fun,
And we were never fine.

Timesickness was killing us,
We were stuck in James Bay,
No clue what to do or when,
Any mistake was going to pay.

Now I'm stuck up in these stocks
Until tomorrow's sundown.
Darkness and Confusion,
Until someone was found.

Forced to help Second,
Or else time would simply disappear.
So we reset time again,
But this time with less fear.

Here we go again,
But this time we did it right.
The tracers had returne,
Finally shedding some light.

We had to go back to 1600
So we did just that.
Having to time travel once again,
We didn't know what to expect.

Flames, Blaze, and Smoke,
Was all you could smell and see.
Still determined to save everyone,
Flashing everyone out; Almost forgetting me.

We were all sage,
From damaged and torn time.
Finally going home,
For now, at least.

Near misses from death,
Still don't know who I am.
Wondering what's next,
But enjoying the 21st century while it lasts...
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Post by lulu on Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:39 am

Very nice poem Jennayyy! o:
Me liked iht! [:
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Post by maybear2☆9 on Tue Jan 17, 2012 12:48 am

I love the author, Haddix..... I'm love every book from her. (:
Love the drawing and poem as well, very creative for sure
Awesome job, jenni
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Post by Hallie on Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:52 pm

That is awesome,Jenni (:
Your picture for it,is very creative!
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Post by ForeverRain on Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:34 pm

That poem is epic! Great job on the project too, I bet you'll get/got an A+++! ;)
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Post by peach rays bri on Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:07 am

omg. thats AWESOME.<3
Yeah, bet you got an A+. LOL

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Post by EpicCookieCruncherCuteXD on Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:12 am

OMG!!! so touching <3
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Post by BubbleGumBell on Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:13 am

That sounds amazing :)
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